I'm a freshman in college and this is an essay about a life changing experience or something that taught me a lesson in life. Please tell me what you think, I honestly think I'm a terrible essay writer and if you think its the worst paper you've ever seen in your life, please say so. Don't hold back :)
Oh and sorry about how it looks, it doesn't really paste correctly in this. I spread it out a little bit but it took out the indents, yes I know paragraphs need to be indented. xD
First Date Gone Awry
Some people’s first dates go horribly wrong; some people’s first dates go perfectly right. I wish that my first date fell under the perfectly right category, but it was far from it. Despite the date going awry I learned from it and it changed not only my love life, but my life as a whole. Before the date I was completely oblivious to what I was doing so I was understandably extremely nervous. I had never kissed a girl before because I was only fourteen so I was excited as well as afraid to even attempt it.
The fact that I was fourteen and she was fifteen made the date a little complicated in itself. I called her when I woke up that day and asked her “So, where do you want to hang out?”
She replied “How about the fair down by the park at 6 p.m.?” which I agreed to hastily without much thought.
I proceeded to take a shower and get prepared for my first date; I put on my cologne and spiked my hair to attempt to make the best impression possible. I sat on my couch watching the clock waiting for it to display 5:45 p.m. which felt like an eternity. The clock finally displayed 5:45 p.m. and I exited the house to my mongoose mountain bike and proceeded to ride it to the park, this is where all the troubles started. While I was riding down a hill my brakes stopped working and I was forced to run into a curb to stop which flipped me over on to the grass. The crash didn’t hurt much but my clothes were covered in the newly mowed grass. I looked at my watch and it displayed 5:50 p.m. therefore I had no time to ride back to my house and change clothes. I rose up and wiped as much grass off of my clothes as possible then walked over to my bike. Since the brakes were out I knew it would be dangerous to ride all the way to the fair though I had no other choice because I couldn’t walk to the park within ten minutes. I made it to the fair rather quickly for having no brakes and proceeded to the tent where we were going to meet. I was so happy that I made it in time. I looked around and saw her looking at me smiling.
I walked over to her and we started talking, I told her what happened on the way to the fair and we both laughed. It seemed as though all was going well. We walked around looking around and talking about various subjects when we came across a bubble popping game where you could win a giant stuffed tiger. She stopped near the game and talked about how cool the stuffed tiger was, in other words she wanted me to win it for her. I checked my pockets and found out that I had forgotten my money. I stood there for around thirty seconds trying to think of what to say, I was so embarrassed. I told her I didn’t have any money and she paused and sighed for a few seconds and said “It’s alright.”
There really wasn’t anything that we could do without any money, I felt so stupid for going to the fair without any money. To make matters worse, I ran out of things to have a conversation about therefore the conversations became dull or nonexistent for periods of time. Before this I had never been on a date before, nor was I very social other than going outside and playing with friends occasionally so coming up with topics to talk about wasn’t second nature to me.
I glanced at her after about a minute without any conversation and she looked extremely bored. She looked at me and said “Well, I have to go and do chores and stuff before I go to sleep.” She left and I was devastated, I knew that was just a lie to get away from how boring I was. It didn’t work out between us because of how boring my personality was so I knew it was time to change. After my first date I became more social and completely changed my life around which made me much happier in the long run, without this day I probably would still be a boring awkward kid that was too shy to talk to anyone.Please critique my essay?Honestly it's not horrible. You have very good details. you do spend a bit too much time on the build up and not as much time on the date but other than that it was pretty good. We had the exact same assignment in my English comp class a couple of weeks ago. And this is better than some ofthe papers I read.Please critique my essay?Honestly it's not bad. It's not 100% great either. I would play around with the wording a bit. That being said I myself am a freshman in college, and if I have learned anything the 1st couple of weeks during my writing class is that detail makes a lot of difference.Please critique my essay?Dear Boring/exciting guy, I loved your essay, and except for a few places that needed commas -- and some transitions would be nice -- it is excellent. you told a first person story %26quot;essay%26quot; about a life changing experience. So, you amused me and I loved all of the personal thoughts without saying, %26quot;I thought%26quot; all the time. great personal essay! Shorten the paragraphs a bit, and fix the punctuation after a coordinating conjunction (you need a comma after and, but, or, nor, for, so). I think your teacher will be amazed, and as amused as I was. Remember that the more details that we can see or hear makes for a better story. The fair must have had somebody calling for you to win the prize for the girl, huh? Put that in, and you have a winner! Thanks for asking, Love and Peace, Stormy Shea
Monday, October 24, 2011
Car thermostat question?
Hi ive had a recent problem with my car. The gauge in my car for the temp has been in the red and i pulled over n let it cool down and all my fluid leaked out. I took it to the shop an they said i need a new thermostat cuz my current one was sticking and causig the fluid to leak out the side, a coolant flush, and my rear brakes were trashed. Ive had zero problems with my brakes and the 547 bucks he wanted to fix those things was redicilous. Well i need a car and i would like your opinion on how much you think i would be charged just for the thermostat to be replaced and a coolant flush would cost. The only reason i can think of that would cost so much is maybe labor repairing my brakes? I figure if theyre already trashed and i never noticed whats the difference. Two weeka prior i got an oil change at a different place and they checked my car and never said anything about brakes. I really have no idea what the place that gave me that estimate was even doing looking at my rear brakes when i went there to check the overheating issue anyway! Hopefully they were just trying to rip me off.Car thermostat question?they just want to lube you and rub your brakes. what shop so i can avoid it cause you'll probably shut them down. a good price depends // amount of time and per hour... i agree what did they want with your brakes...autozone.com parts store.Car thermostat question?to flush the system and replace the thermostat should cost between 50 and 100, rear brakes should cost 100 - 150 depending on the needs...
yea... go somewhere else!Car thermostat question?See qu. 2-u what kind of car yeas model cant help any one here all of you are crying and it sad you pay hi dollar for NOTHING cause you cant tell us what you have car problems with and thats sad sorry for your loss of money i bet your friends know the car your in but i dont see them helping so? what type of vechile you dont have ?????Car thermostat question?Lots of shops add extra work. Its highway robbery. Dont go back there. Go to someone you can trust.Car thermostat question?Just to replace the thermostat itself maybe $50 depending on which car you have.
yea... go somewhere else!Car thermostat question?See qu. 2-u what kind of car yeas model cant help any one here all of you are crying and it sad you pay hi dollar for NOTHING cause you cant tell us what you have car problems with and thats sad sorry for your loss of money i bet your friends know the car your in but i dont see them helping so? what type of vechile you dont have ?????Car thermostat question?Lots of shops add extra work. Its highway robbery. Dont go back there. Go to someone you can trust.Car thermostat question?Just to replace the thermostat itself maybe $50 depending on which car you have.
1999 Ford Expedition ABS light?
I own a 1999 Ford Expedition with a 4.6L, it is 2wd, and has 4 wheel disc brakes. The other day when i was backing out of the drive way the ABS light in the i nstrument cluster came on. So the next day i jacked it up and checked the brakes on the front, they were worn so i changed them and hoped the light would go back off and it didnt. What would cause this warning light to come on and what do i need to fix or change to make it go off or do i just need to reset it some how? thanks in advance for your help1999 Ford Expedition ABS light?Yes, U do have to reset it, any shop with an ABS scanner can do it for U,
ask 'em 2 read a code for U, probably its a sensor, but U got 4 sensors, so its good to know which one1999 Ford Expedition ABS light?The ABS light came on because there is a problem with the ABS system. Could be the ABS computer, or one of the sensors on the brake calipers.1999 Ford Expedition ABS light?usually the rear sensor goes out on the rear end, but need tester to erase codes to turn light off
ask 'em 2 read a code for U, probably its a sensor, but U got 4 sensors, so its good to know which one1999 Ford Expedition ABS light?The ABS light came on because there is a problem with the ABS system. Could be the ABS computer, or one of the sensors on the brake calipers.1999 Ford Expedition ABS light?usually the rear sensor goes out on the rear end, but need tester to erase codes to turn light off
Making Homemade Caravan?
hi, informations for south australia
just wondering if i make my own caravan chassis which im only thinking about at this stage,
how hard is it to just register and what exactly has to be done to register a homemade chassis the first time ill have to register the chassis only first so i can tow it from one place to the other to work on it, how will i go on that.
what has to be done to get a vin for the first time on a homemade caravan chassis.
what size box tubing for a caravan chassis would i need. i was thinking 65x50 mm square tubing for the main chassis and 50x50mm tubing for the insides of the chassis. and maybe 42x19mm timber or metal for the framework.
is it cheaper to buy a 500 dollar 15ft caravan and rebuild it fron the ground up or change the front and back so the whole thing looks like a viscount with the possibillity of having to have the brakes replaced or is it cheaper to just make a new chassis as well and buy the outside sheeting secondhand seperately.
whats the requirements to register a homemade caravan chassis first time as in lighting and brakes and chains.
can you please give me information in your own words what has to be done and how to get a vin first time on a homemade caravan chassis and am i able to rivert the vin plate on if i get a number from you guys.
am i able to buy a old camper trailer and strip the brakes and wheel hubs off it.
Making Homemade Caravan?Look, just reading your question gives me the impression you don't know the first thing about doing what you propose, so I'd suggest you should just buy a caravan!
To start with, you would probably need to have an engineers' report to ensure your design and construction are adequate for the desired construction and weight. Just how do you propose to do all this metalwork for the chassis, unless you have the skills and equipment required?
You don't need to %26quot;buy an old camper trailer and strip the brakes and wheel hubs off it%26quot;, for instance. You would buy already built assemblies and springs, etc., from a trailer parts supplier. Brand new!
Even he would need to know the finished and loaded weight, track, the type of wheel(s) you intend, the type of braking.
If you managed to do the required metal work for the chassis but weld it poorly, it won't be passed. I would expect the inspection would not even be done until the entire job is finished, not just on %26quot;chassis only%26quot;.
A caravan builder can do a far more professional job of building, with clever internals, and lighter in weight than you could possibly achieve.
If you do the job yourself, they will go over the workmanship %26quot;with a fine toothed comb%26quot;.Making Homemade Caravan?i think you have a damn good question , pity there isn't a damn good answer to it , i am pondering the same thoughts about a total rebuild from chassis upwards , good luck
just wondering if i make my own caravan chassis which im only thinking about at this stage,
how hard is it to just register and what exactly has to be done to register a homemade chassis the first time ill have to register the chassis only first so i can tow it from one place to the other to work on it, how will i go on that.
what has to be done to get a vin for the first time on a homemade caravan chassis.
what size box tubing for a caravan chassis would i need. i was thinking 65x50 mm square tubing for the main chassis and 50x50mm tubing for the insides of the chassis. and maybe 42x19mm timber or metal for the framework.
is it cheaper to buy a 500 dollar 15ft caravan and rebuild it fron the ground up or change the front and back so the whole thing looks like a viscount with the possibillity of having to have the brakes replaced or is it cheaper to just make a new chassis as well and buy the outside sheeting secondhand seperately.
whats the requirements to register a homemade caravan chassis first time as in lighting and brakes and chains.
can you please give me information in your own words what has to be done and how to get a vin first time on a homemade caravan chassis and am i able to rivert the vin plate on if i get a number from you guys.
am i able to buy a old camper trailer and strip the brakes and wheel hubs off it.
Making Homemade Caravan?Look, just reading your question gives me the impression you don't know the first thing about doing what you propose, so I'd suggest you should just buy a caravan!
To start with, you would probably need to have an engineers' report to ensure your design and construction are adequate for the desired construction and weight. Just how do you propose to do all this metalwork for the chassis, unless you have the skills and equipment required?
You don't need to %26quot;buy an old camper trailer and strip the brakes and wheel hubs off it%26quot;, for instance. You would buy already built assemblies and springs, etc., from a trailer parts supplier. Brand new!
Even he would need to know the finished and loaded weight, track, the type of wheel(s) you intend, the type of braking.
If you managed to do the required metal work for the chassis but weld it poorly, it won't be passed. I would expect the inspection would not even be done until the entire job is finished, not just on %26quot;chassis only%26quot;.
A caravan builder can do a far more professional job of building, with clever internals, and lighter in weight than you could possibly achieve.
If you do the job yourself, they will go over the workmanship %26quot;with a fine toothed comb%26quot;.Making Homemade Caravan?i think you have a damn good question , pity there isn't a damn good answer to it , i am pondering the same thoughts about a total rebuild from chassis upwards , good luck
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Making Homemade Caravan?Just to answer the financial aspect of it, I would bet that you could either spend the next one or two years saving for parts and building it or you could save your money for the next year or two and buy one already built for you for about the same money or less. Do it whatever way you like if it is your dream to do so.
HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?
Hi,
I have a 1992 Toyota Corolla, and I went to the pool earlier today and came out and my brake lights were on!! Car was off, the emergency brake wasn't on, not that that should make a difference, but anyway when I started it, it cranked right up, and the headlights are fine, but for some reason, the brake lights just stay on. When I step on the brake, nothing changes. I was concerned about it running out my battery if left unfixed, so I pulled the fuse for the tail lights and it finally went out, but I know this can't be good. What is happening to my car, and how much should I expect to pay to fix it? Is there a quick fix, or maybe something I haven't tried yet?
Thank you for your answers!!!HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?Get youself down by the break pedal. You will see that the 'arm' of the pedal, when pushed down, hits a little plastic device which has a spring under it. When you step on the break, it engages the device with clicks the break lights on. Foot off the break and the device is disengaged and the spring makes it go back in place. Your device has gotten stuck in the engaged position. Just gently pull it up with your hand. that should do it. I hope.HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?It will run the battery down eventually. The switch is on the brake pedal and the plunger on that switch is stuck. It needs to have the dust and grit cleaned off it. Put some WD40 on it and push it in and out until it frees up.HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?i had the same problem with my car though it seem to only happen when the car was running. i had it checked to then discover the brake light switch located under the foot pedal needed some adjustment.HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?Simple fix. The inexpensive brake light switch is out of adjustment or needs replacement. It's located above your brake petal linkage up inside the footwell.HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?brake light switch is either bad or out of adjustment, it's under the dash up on top of the brake pedal.ittwit email
I have a 1992 Toyota Corolla, and I went to the pool earlier today and came out and my brake lights were on!! Car was off, the emergency brake wasn't on, not that that should make a difference, but anyway when I started it, it cranked right up, and the headlights are fine, but for some reason, the brake lights just stay on. When I step on the brake, nothing changes. I was concerned about it running out my battery if left unfixed, so I pulled the fuse for the tail lights and it finally went out, but I know this can't be good. What is happening to my car, and how much should I expect to pay to fix it? Is there a quick fix, or maybe something I haven't tried yet?
Thank you for your answers!!!HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?Get youself down by the break pedal. You will see that the 'arm' of the pedal, when pushed down, hits a little plastic device which has a spring under it. When you step on the break, it engages the device with clicks the break lights on. Foot off the break and the device is disengaged and the spring makes it go back in place. Your device has gotten stuck in the engaged position. Just gently pull it up with your hand. that should do it. I hope.HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?It will run the battery down eventually. The switch is on the brake pedal and the plunger on that switch is stuck. It needs to have the dust and grit cleaned off it. Put some WD40 on it and push it in and out until it frees up.HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?i had the same problem with my car though it seem to only happen when the car was running. i had it checked to then discover the brake light switch located under the foot pedal needed some adjustment.HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?Simple fix. The inexpensive brake light switch is out of adjustment or needs replacement. It's located above your brake petal linkage up inside the footwell.HELP ME!!!! BRAKE LIGHTS WONT GO OUT?brake light switch is either bad or out of adjustment, it's under the dash up on top of the brake pedal.
96 ford Aspire makes odd sound like something UNWINDING in the shifter! What is it and how can I make it stop?
Ok I dont know how to describe this except if you have ever heard what it sounds like when a metal windup toy is winding down, thats the sound! It does it when you turn the ignition on/off, also when engine is not running and you take your foot off the brake. This has happened since I bought it almost 4 yrs ago, seems to happen a little more often now. WHAT IS IT AND DO I NEED TO REPLACE/REPAIR SOMETHING??? I love this funny-looking little car, its been extremely reliable and gets great MPG, but this noise has been a constant worry to me! The guy who changes my oil just shakes his head and says it must not be too serious, or makes a joke about the hamster's wheel needing serviced, but he is not the one who could be stranded on the side of the road some dark and rainy night! Any info would be appreciated! thanks!96 ford Aspire makes odd sound like something UNWINDING in the shifter! What is it and how can I make it stop?Classic transmission bearing failure noise. It will do that forever without harming anything. The part is relatively cheap but the transmission may have to be split to change it. Watch the fluid level and check the drain for metal filings. If you get sick of it you can source a junkyard transmission.
I wrote a new poem , any opinion?
no one of us wanted it to go as far as it did
how come a bunch of roses became torn leaves
we knew something's wrong but we had to proceed
each biggest passion is taken by god's thieves
promising me you would change as much as you can
we both rided speedily on a car without brakes
everything went gradually too far as much as we ran
walking as a blind while unknown troubles are next
the soft touches started saddening and causing pain
a %26quot;foreign%26quot; person cuddled me, I just tried to escape
when I ain't placed in your heart , what it contains
the flower you held, keeps drying out, left scape
tomorrow is a new day, so why it still has past memories
it's not a matter of time until my scars disappear
we always play lovers while everyone stands and sees
they all know why despite of that we're still having fearI wrote a new poem , any opinion?Nissim, why are you making it difficult for people to appreciate what you have to say? By having practically no punctuation you are saying.....I don't care if anyone understands this, I do...but, surely you should be trying to communicate?
(incidentally - it should be we both rode speedily in a car - is English not your first language? I'm not trying to belittle you....it just seems an odd construction for an English speaker)
This might be a poem worth reading - but, it is too much trouble for me to decipher which is a pityI wrote a new poem , any opinion?I mean... It's one of those poems that makes no sense... It sounds better than most of the yahoo answer poems... But this still needs a lot of work.
And punctuation please....I wrote a new poem , any opinion?It sounds good just you have to make your main idea of what your trying to say clearer
please answer mine
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how come a bunch of roses became torn leaves
we knew something's wrong but we had to proceed
each biggest passion is taken by god's thieves
promising me you would change as much as you can
we both rided speedily on a car without brakes
everything went gradually too far as much as we ran
walking as a blind while unknown troubles are next
the soft touches started saddening and causing pain
a %26quot;foreign%26quot; person cuddled me, I just tried to escape
when I ain't placed in your heart , what it contains
the flower you held, keeps drying out, left scape
tomorrow is a new day, so why it still has past memories
it's not a matter of time until my scars disappear
we always play lovers while everyone stands and sees
they all know why despite of that we're still having fearI wrote a new poem , any opinion?Nissim, why are you making it difficult for people to appreciate what you have to say? By having practically no punctuation you are saying.....I don't care if anyone understands this, I do...but, surely you should be trying to communicate?
(incidentally - it should be we both rode speedily in a car - is English not your first language? I'm not trying to belittle you....it just seems an odd construction for an English speaker)
This might be a poem worth reading - but, it is too much trouble for me to decipher which is a pityI wrote a new poem , any opinion?I mean... It's one of those poems that makes no sense... It sounds better than most of the yahoo answer poems... But this still needs a lot of work.
And punctuation please....I wrote a new poem , any opinion?It sounds good just you have to make your main idea of what your trying to say clearer
please answer mine
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AvGoxW1p3YRY2E91Z3NRLtpp.Bd.;_ylv=3?qid=20080810124738AAg3ake
Where can i find the Brake Booster line?
Im thinking of doing a eaFoam for the beginning of the year. I cut the water bottle and made sure there is NO Water in it.
I have also heard that you should NOT suck more than 1/3 the can INTo the engine THROUGH the Brake Booster.
Now, 3 questions:
1) How do i %26quot;Remove%26quot; the Brake Booster Line? (1991 Oldsmobile Cutlass Calais Iron Duke 2.5L Tech4)
2) do you REV the engine while it SLOWLY Sucks, or NOT?
3) HOW LONG do you let it RUN before you turn it OFF to let it SIT?
I already know you have some in the Oil and Gas already when you do, and then let it run until Smoke (Carbon) Clears.. then take a 50 to 100-mile Round Trip, THEN change Oil, Spark Plugs, Wires (tune up) as your INJECTORS are Nice and Clean, but your Oil will be sludgy black Garbage by that time? (Cleaner engine, better)
ThanksWhere can i find the Brake Booster line?The brake booster is mounted behind the master cylinder on the booster there is one hose about the size of a garden hose this is your vacuum supply to the booster it has a directional valve in the hose at the booster end that is made of plastic caution must be used to prevent cracking it while trying to pull it out of the booster grommet. Spray it with a lubricant to ease removal. The valve itself will have to be removed from the hose to allow the vacuum to pull the foam in through the intake. Yes you may have to rev the engine a little to keep it running.Where can i find the Brake Booster line?You need a brake bleeder kit. It is a hand pump that pushes brake fluid in the lines and the brakes until it comes out clean and air free.
The car is off and the brkae lines are open so the excess fluid drains out.
I have also heard that you should NOT suck more than 1/3 the can INTo the engine THROUGH the Brake Booster.
Now, 3 questions:
1) How do i %26quot;Remove%26quot; the Brake Booster Line? (1991 Oldsmobile Cutlass Calais Iron Duke 2.5L Tech4)
2) do you REV the engine while it SLOWLY Sucks, or NOT?
3) HOW LONG do you let it RUN before you turn it OFF to let it SIT?
I already know you have some in the Oil and Gas already when you do, and then let it run until Smoke (Carbon) Clears.. then take a 50 to 100-mile Round Trip, THEN change Oil, Spark Plugs, Wires (tune up) as your INJECTORS are Nice and Clean, but your Oil will be sludgy black Garbage by that time? (Cleaner engine, better)
ThanksWhere can i find the Brake Booster line?The brake booster is mounted behind the master cylinder on the booster there is one hose about the size of a garden hose this is your vacuum supply to the booster it has a directional valve in the hose at the booster end that is made of plastic caution must be used to prevent cracking it while trying to pull it out of the booster grommet. Spray it with a lubricant to ease removal. The valve itself will have to be removed from the hose to allow the vacuum to pull the foam in through the intake. Yes you may have to rev the engine a little to keep it running.Where can i find the Brake Booster line?You need a brake bleeder kit. It is a hand pump that pushes brake fluid in the lines and the brakes until it comes out clean and air free.
The car is off and the brkae lines are open so the excess fluid drains out.
Nissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?
Got an Automatic 03 Nissan Micra (getting rid of it in a few weeks fingers crossed), but in the last few days it's developed a problem.
To get it out of 'Park' normally you put your foot on the brake, press the button on the side of the gearstick and move it into Drive/Reverse etc. In the last couple of days (more so in the evenings), the button is getting stuck halfway and won't go all the way in, so i can't put it into gear. On average it takes a about 4 or 5 goes of releasing the brake, pressing harder etc before it will depress fully so i can move it into gear. Once it's in gear there's no problem changing between drive, reverse and back into Park. The problem is only when the car is first switched on and I have to put it in gear.
Anyone got any idea what's wrong, why it's started all of a sudden, how I can get it fixed etc? I'm planning on selling it soon and I don't think anyone's going to want it with a dodgy gearbox!Nissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?Park interlock solenoid is at the base of the shifter handle. Sometimes I wash out out coffee Coke and other sticky beverages. Glass cleaner and compressed air. Those sticky substances get even stickier at cooler temperatures. So while selling the car make sure the car is fully warmed up and interior toasty warm. And check to see if the brake lights are turning on and off properly. After it is sold you can say your just a Girl and don't know what they are talking about it worked just fine for 5 years. Then tell them the name of the nissan dealer. By the way It might still be covered by powertrain warranty or ask the dealership if you can get the shifter mechanism covered by Nissan Good Will.Nissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?is the car year 93 micra??
problem may be 1/ shifter switch or 2/shifter solenoid or
3/shifter cable or 4/brake switch or 5/ as simply as the fuse
try that and good luckNissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?there is a solenoid down at the end of your shifter. chances are it needs to be replaced. good luckNissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?It could be the torque converter is going to pack up or ,The other thing is to have it serviced an get the garage to put it right then you when you sell you will have peace of mind and a satisfied customer ,nb it could be just a slight adjustment that cost few pounds to put rightNissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?hi there try and take off gearstick gaitor to get access to linkage give it a good spray with release oil like wd40 allow it to soak in and as you are spraying try and move gearstick jock
To get it out of 'Park' normally you put your foot on the brake, press the button on the side of the gearstick and move it into Drive/Reverse etc. In the last couple of days (more so in the evenings), the button is getting stuck halfway and won't go all the way in, so i can't put it into gear. On average it takes a about 4 or 5 goes of releasing the brake, pressing harder etc before it will depress fully so i can move it into gear. Once it's in gear there's no problem changing between drive, reverse and back into Park. The problem is only when the car is first switched on and I have to put it in gear.
Anyone got any idea what's wrong, why it's started all of a sudden, how I can get it fixed etc? I'm planning on selling it soon and I don't think anyone's going to want it with a dodgy gearbox!Nissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?Park interlock solenoid is at the base of the shifter handle. Sometimes I wash out out coffee Coke and other sticky beverages. Glass cleaner and compressed air. Those sticky substances get even stickier at cooler temperatures. So while selling the car make sure the car is fully warmed up and interior toasty warm. And check to see if the brake lights are turning on and off properly. After it is sold you can say your just a Girl and don't know what they are talking about it worked just fine for 5 years. Then tell them the name of the nissan dealer. By the way It might still be covered by powertrain warranty or ask the dealership if you can get the shifter mechanism covered by Nissan Good Will.Nissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?is the car year 93 micra??
problem may be 1/ shifter switch or 2/shifter solenoid or
3/shifter cable or 4/brake switch or 5/ as simply as the fuse
try that and good luckNissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?there is a solenoid down at the end of your shifter. chances are it needs to be replaced. good luckNissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?It could be the torque converter is going to pack up or ,The other thing is to have it serviced an get the garage to put it right then you when you sell you will have peace of mind and a satisfied customer ,nb it could be just a slight adjustment that cost few pounds to put rightNissan Automatic - problems getting it out of 'P' (Park)?hi there try and take off gearstick gaitor to get access to linkage give it a good spray with release oil like wd40 allow it to soak in and as you are spraying try and move gearstick jock
Questions about cars?
i have some questions about cars. i have no one in my liffe to show me things. i have a saab 1993 900s.
i want to know , how to put brake fluid in it and where.
how do you know when your tires need to be changed the tires are a couple months old right now. and how do i check tire pressure and how much pressure should the tire have?Questions about cars?try here http://www.saabcentral.com/forums/index.Questions about cars?Buy a repair manual. They are written in a way that anyone can learn and understand things.
There is a brake fluid reservoir, a semi-clear container with a cap on it. It will be under the hood, against the firewall (the flat wall of metal between the engine bay and the rest of the car). It will be immediately in front of the driver position, near the top, easy to access. It should have a yellow cap that says %26quot;DOT 3%26quot; or DOT 4%26quot; on it (I forget which). Be careful with brake fluid, it eats away at paint, almost instantly. Place a rag around where you'll be pouring, and wipe up any spills.
If your engine looks like this, it should be the yellow cap in the upper left of the photo, but check for the DOT 3 on the cap before you fill anything:
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/co
Tires have wear indicators. On the part of tire that touches the road are treads, grooves in the rubber. In the %26quot;valley%26quot; of the grooves, look for a small raised portion, there should be one about every 10 inches or so in the groove. When the tread wears down enough to match the raised portion in the groove, the tire is at its limit, and should be replaced. Tires should also be replaced if they looked cracked (the rubber dries and rots), or if they have a bubble, or if they're damaged.
photo of the wear indicator I'm trying to explain, notice the raised portion in the groove:
http://www.diymyride.com/wp-content/uplo
Different tires require different pressure. Look at the side of the tire, there are letters and numbers. Look for the pressure, it should say something like %26quot;MAX PSI 45%26quot; or something else, the thing to look for is %26quot;PSI%26quot;, which is the pressure. You check the pressure with a tire pressure gauge, it's a cheap tool found in almost any gas station convenience store, and it is easy to check the pressure. But don't bother checking it until you're near a compressor to fill it (usually right next to the coin-operated vacuum cleaner in gas station parking lots).
Here's an example of the words on a tire sidewall, notice the PSI in the lower left of the pic:
http://www.aa1car.com/library/tire_info.
tire pressure gauges:
http://www.2carpros.com/how_does_it_workbest myspace msdn
i want to know , how to put brake fluid in it and where.
how do you know when your tires need to be changed the tires are a couple months old right now. and how do i check tire pressure and how much pressure should the tire have?Questions about cars?try here http://www.saabcentral.com/forums/index.Questions about cars?Buy a repair manual. They are written in a way that anyone can learn and understand things.
There is a brake fluid reservoir, a semi-clear container with a cap on it. It will be under the hood, against the firewall (the flat wall of metal between the engine bay and the rest of the car). It will be immediately in front of the driver position, near the top, easy to access. It should have a yellow cap that says %26quot;DOT 3%26quot; or DOT 4%26quot; on it (I forget which). Be careful with brake fluid, it eats away at paint, almost instantly. Place a rag around where you'll be pouring, and wipe up any spills.
If your engine looks like this, it should be the yellow cap in the upper left of the photo, but check for the DOT 3 on the cap before you fill anything:
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/co
Tires have wear indicators. On the part of tire that touches the road are treads, grooves in the rubber. In the %26quot;valley%26quot; of the grooves, look for a small raised portion, there should be one about every 10 inches or so in the groove. When the tread wears down enough to match the raised portion in the groove, the tire is at its limit, and should be replaced. Tires should also be replaced if they looked cracked (the rubber dries and rots), or if they have a bubble, or if they're damaged.
photo of the wear indicator I'm trying to explain, notice the raised portion in the groove:
http://www.diymyride.com/wp-content/uplo
Different tires require different pressure. Look at the side of the tire, there are letters and numbers. Look for the pressure, it should say something like %26quot;MAX PSI 45%26quot; or something else, the thing to look for is %26quot;PSI%26quot;, which is the pressure. You check the pressure with a tire pressure gauge, it's a cheap tool found in almost any gas station convenience store, and it is easy to check the pressure. But don't bother checking it until you're near a compressor to fill it (usually right next to the coin-operated vacuum cleaner in gas station parking lots).
Here's an example of the words on a tire sidewall, notice the PSI in the lower left of the pic:
http://www.aa1car.com/library/tire_info.
tire pressure gauges:
http://www.2carpros.com/how_does_it_work
How do you drive a stick shift?
If the car is in neutral you put your foot on the brake and then press in the clutch to start the car. Then you take your foot off the brake while the clutch is pressed in all the way and move the shifter into 1st. Do you then move the clutch back about half way and then press the gas pedal in a little bit and then let off the clutch and you take off?
I dont get it kinda. I heard that you let up off the clutch half way and while your letting up, you press the gas the same amount? I dont want to floor it! Are you supposed to let up on the clutch half way when you put it in first and then press the gas pedal down a little? I dont think you would press the gas pedal down half way with the clutch half way down and then let up off the clutch.
Also, when theres a stop sign ahead, do you throw it in neutral and slow down then come to a stop?
Also at a red light, lets say you are in 4th gear and you see the red light ahead. There are tons of cars behind you and you happen to throw it in neutral and all of a sudden the light changes to green. What do you do now? Do you shift it back up to 4th again? It seems to me that the car would mess up because if you shift it into 1st or 2nd gear going that high of speed it would blow the engine? Or do you not have to press the gas because its already going fast and you just press the clutch to 2nd then let off and press the cluch in again to 3rd without pressing the gas?
IM CONFUSED! I'm getting a manual V6 mustang soon. I know about the shifting patterns and stuff its just that the part where you use the clutch while pressing the gas.How do you drive a stick shift?i own a 1987 bronco 2 its a standard my transmission is a high rpm transmission i can go 65 mph in 3rd gear. but thats me well do you have a rpm tack that will help you when to shift if you do . anyway to start when you start your car you probably have a clutch safety switch which means in order to make your starter work your clutch needs to be held in. start your car put it in 1st slowly release your clutch giving it a little gas while releasing the clutch dont hold the clutch and giving it to much gas can make you spin your clutch dont do that. when you are going to stop dont put it in neutral with newer cars like that you need to down shift when stoping or slowing down down shifting means if your doing 40 in 4th slow down by taking your foot of the gas when you slow a little even slowly apply your brake enough to down shift put clutch in put it up in 3rd release the clutch no gas needed if its a five speed you only use 5th if your 45 mph or higher its a highway gear go from 5th to 4th then slow alittle more down to about 35 then downshift to 3rd gear then from there some cars you can go to 2nd but your speed has got to be just right you dont need neutral but if it makes you feel safe then use it i would just put the brake on alittle then the clutch keep the clutch in to come to a stop if its in gear or you will kill your engine and be really embarresed you will get the hang of it once you do it for a while it if you downshift from 4th into 2nd or 1st you best be quick to press that clutch when you hear your engine start rapping really loud just put your clutch in and shift it up into whatever gear your going fast enough for it takes time to get the hang of a stick if its your everyday car you should get the hang of it asap just remember downshift to lower speeds from higher speeds and during take off not the same amount of gas as clutch a little gas to actually this might give you a idea keep your foot off the gas slowly release your clutch when your engine sounds like its going to die put your clutch back in remember how much clutch that took then release the clutch to that point and slowly give it gas letting your clutch the rest of the way out like i said a rpm tack will help you with shifting if you dont have a rpm tack listen to your engine to hear when its time to shift if your giving it gas and your not increasing speed its definatly time to shift. if you press the gas pedel down halfway with the clutch halfway down and then let up off the clutch one of three things could happen you will either spin your clutch thats not good, squeal your tires that not good , or kill your engine that not good also embarrasing well good luck to you i hope i helped there is not much i can tell you it just takes practice remember when it comes to downshifting newer transmissions need that neutral if you feel comfortable that will only speed you up and wear your brakes alot faster than downshifting get the hang of downshifting as well as your take off k goood luck to ya How do you drive a stick shift?there is no way i could explain this good enough over the computer, so all i can say is if you know someone who has an old beater car or truck with a manual trans go and learn on that. ( if they will let you lol ) its just allot better to get in and just go at it haha. thats the way i learned, cruising up and down my local fields with a crappy 5 speed plymouth laser. so yea all i can say is good luckHow do you drive a stick shift?let off the clutch...foot on the gas... clutch off the clutch foot on the gass How do you drive a stick shift?if you are confused, then i would suggest you get more driving lessons for manual. ok to answer the first question you have to find the clutch biting point and you slowly add gas carefully while letting up the clutch, you will start to move forward, easily and slowly let off the clutch to fully get it in gear, if you don't you'll stall the engine.
2nd question answer, when you are coming to a stop you can just press on the brake and leave it in gear then at the very last moment before you stop completely push down the clutch and put it in neutral.
And to answer the last question when u are in 4th gear slowly down at a red light, when u are in 4th gear never throw it in 1st, 2nd gear is an exception if you are still rolling, 1st gear is there to get you going from a stop, if you are still moving or rolling, keep it in 2nd gear. but yes, when u are slowly down in 4th and the light turns green while you are still rolling, then just push down on the gas pedal again since you are still at your regular speed. And since you are getting a v6 mustang soon in manual. I strongly advise you get some stick shift driving lessons, it will benefit you since you are confused about some things about stick shift and you are still learning it
I dont get it kinda. I heard that you let up off the clutch half way and while your letting up, you press the gas the same amount? I dont want to floor it! Are you supposed to let up on the clutch half way when you put it in first and then press the gas pedal down a little? I dont think you would press the gas pedal down half way with the clutch half way down and then let up off the clutch.
Also, when theres a stop sign ahead, do you throw it in neutral and slow down then come to a stop?
Also at a red light, lets say you are in 4th gear and you see the red light ahead. There are tons of cars behind you and you happen to throw it in neutral and all of a sudden the light changes to green. What do you do now? Do you shift it back up to 4th again? It seems to me that the car would mess up because if you shift it into 1st or 2nd gear going that high of speed it would blow the engine? Or do you not have to press the gas because its already going fast and you just press the clutch to 2nd then let off and press the cluch in again to 3rd without pressing the gas?
IM CONFUSED! I'm getting a manual V6 mustang soon. I know about the shifting patterns and stuff its just that the part where you use the clutch while pressing the gas.How do you drive a stick shift?i own a 1987 bronco 2 its a standard my transmission is a high rpm transmission i can go 65 mph in 3rd gear. but thats me well do you have a rpm tack that will help you when to shift if you do . anyway to start when you start your car you probably have a clutch safety switch which means in order to make your starter work your clutch needs to be held in. start your car put it in 1st slowly release your clutch giving it a little gas while releasing the clutch dont hold the clutch and giving it to much gas can make you spin your clutch dont do that. when you are going to stop dont put it in neutral with newer cars like that you need to down shift when stoping or slowing down down shifting means if your doing 40 in 4th slow down by taking your foot of the gas when you slow a little even slowly apply your brake enough to down shift put clutch in put it up in 3rd release the clutch no gas needed if its a five speed you only use 5th if your 45 mph or higher its a highway gear go from 5th to 4th then slow alittle more down to about 35 then downshift to 3rd gear then from there some cars you can go to 2nd but your speed has got to be just right you dont need neutral but if it makes you feel safe then use it i would just put the brake on alittle then the clutch keep the clutch in to come to a stop if its in gear or you will kill your engine and be really embarresed you will get the hang of it once you do it for a while it if you downshift from 4th into 2nd or 1st you best be quick to press that clutch when you hear your engine start rapping really loud just put your clutch in and shift it up into whatever gear your going fast enough for it takes time to get the hang of a stick if its your everyday car you should get the hang of it asap just remember downshift to lower speeds from higher speeds and during take off not the same amount of gas as clutch a little gas to actually this might give you a idea keep your foot off the gas slowly release your clutch when your engine sounds like its going to die put your clutch back in remember how much clutch that took then release the clutch to that point and slowly give it gas letting your clutch the rest of the way out like i said a rpm tack will help you with shifting if you dont have a rpm tack listen to your engine to hear when its time to shift if your giving it gas and your not increasing speed its definatly time to shift. if you press the gas pedel down halfway with the clutch halfway down and then let up off the clutch one of three things could happen you will either spin your clutch thats not good, squeal your tires that not good , or kill your engine that not good also embarrasing well good luck to you i hope i helped there is not much i can tell you it just takes practice remember when it comes to downshifting newer transmissions need that neutral if you feel comfortable that will only speed you up and wear your brakes alot faster than downshifting get the hang of downshifting as well as your take off k goood luck to ya How do you drive a stick shift?there is no way i could explain this good enough over the computer, so all i can say is if you know someone who has an old beater car or truck with a manual trans go and learn on that. ( if they will let you lol ) its just allot better to get in and just go at it haha. thats the way i learned, cruising up and down my local fields with a crappy 5 speed plymouth laser. so yea all i can say is good luckHow do you drive a stick shift?let off the clutch...foot on the gas... clutch off the clutch foot on the gass How do you drive a stick shift?if you are confused, then i would suggest you get more driving lessons for manual. ok to answer the first question you have to find the clutch biting point and you slowly add gas carefully while letting up the clutch, you will start to move forward, easily and slowly let off the clutch to fully get it in gear, if you don't you'll stall the engine.
2nd question answer, when you are coming to a stop you can just press on the brake and leave it in gear then at the very last moment before you stop completely push down the clutch and put it in neutral.
And to answer the last question when u are in 4th gear slowly down at a red light, when u are in 4th gear never throw it in 1st, 2nd gear is an exception if you are still rolling, 1st gear is there to get you going from a stop, if you are still moving or rolling, keep it in 2nd gear. but yes, when u are slowly down in 4th and the light turns green while you are still rolling, then just push down on the gas pedal again since you are still at your regular speed. And since you are getting a v6 mustang soon in manual. I strongly advise you get some stick shift driving lessons, it will benefit you since you are confused about some things about stick shift and you are still learning it
How do you drive a stick shift?
If the car is in neutral you put your foot on the brake and then press in the clutch to start the car. Then you take your foot off the brake while the clutch is pressed in all the way and move the shifter into 1st. Do you then move the clutch back about half way and then press the gas pedal in a little bit and then let off the clutch and you take off?
I dont get it kinda. I heard that you let up off the clutch half way and while your letting up, you press the gas the same amount? I dont want to floor it! Are you supposed to let up on the clutch half way when you put it in first and then press the gas pedal down a little? I dont think you would press the gas pedal down half way with the clutch half way down and then let up off the clutch.
Also, when theres a stop sign ahead, do you throw it in neutral and slow down then come to a stop?
Also at a red light, lets say you are in 4th gear and you see the red light ahead. There are tons of cars behind you and you happen to throw it in neutral and all of a sudden the light changes to green. What do you do now? Do you shift it back up to 4th again? It seems to me that the car would mess up because if you shift it into 1st or 2nd gear going that high of speed it would blow the engine? Or do you not have to press the gas because its already going fast and you just press the clutch to 2nd then let off and press the cluch in again to 3rd without pressing the gas?
IM CONFUSED! I'm getting a manual V6 mustang soon. I know about the shifting patterns and stuff its just that the part where you use the clutch while pressing the gas.How do you drive a stick shift?I drive a stick shift with a smile on my face because I am in control.
Seriously, I will pass along this bit of advise.
Manual transmissions are not sequential gear boxes like the type in a motorcycle. One can be driving in 4th, see a red light ahead, step on the clutch, step on the brake, and as the car slows to a stop, shift directly from 4th to 1st, skipping 3rd and 2nd.
Driving a stick shift is about skill, and knowing your machine. It just takes more skill to drive a stick, which makes you a better driver. YOU must pay attention to your driving, which will keep you from getting in accidents.
Find an older adult that can teach you and EXPLAIN what they are doing as they drive and shift. Then you can get behind the wheel and apply what you have learned to really driving your mustang.
I wish all cars were equipped with manual transmissions. There would be less distracted drivers on the road today.
Hard to eat, drink, talk on a cell phone, check your e-mails on your Blackberry, or text on a cell phone when you need to shift every few seconds.How do you drive a stick shift?About the red light or stop sign, If you're in 4th gear you down shift into 3rd and then 2nd if you have to. It saves your breaks and allows you to easily take off again if the light turns green before you get to the intersection. You only use the clutch to shift gears and never put the clutch in half way, you'll burn it out.How do you drive a stick shift?Too hard to explain all that in words but you sort of have the right idea. When you get the car, go directly to some vacant ground and practice!
btw it's not a great idea to just coast up to lights in neutral. As you decrease your speed you should be coming down through the gears. Does your license cover you for a stick shift anyway?How do you drive a stick shift?ok what you need to do is use the clutch ok and also don't grind your gears ok now the gas and clutch you you press gently on the gas as you let up on the clutch ok How do you drive a stick shift?I dunno if you deserve the V6 mustang...How do you drive a stick shift?push in clutch and shift , then let clutch outHow do you drive a stick shift? Go www.expertvillage.com they will teach you, in one of there videosHow do you drive a stick shift? When you feel the car pull as your letting up on the clutch then start to give it gas. You can also watch your tach the rpm will start to drop as the clutch starts to engage. When that happens give it some more gas and let the clutch out the rest of the way.
When your pulling up to a light in forth it kinda depends on your speed if you still moving at a decent pace you should just downshift to 3rd.
When your down shifting if you bump the gas a little when in neutral right before you change gears down as in 4th to like 2nd. You'll bring the motor revs back to where they should be for that gear. This keeps the car from as you put it messing up.
For example If your on a two lane road and your wanting to pass someone quickly and say your in overdrive. You would downshift to 4th and get around alot quicker. but as your changing gears you have to bring the revs up to match the gear. This is not necessary everytime you downshift but you should learn how to do this correctly. You'll find driving a stick alot of fun especially in rear wheel drive once you learn to do it right.
I dont get it kinda. I heard that you let up off the clutch half way and while your letting up, you press the gas the same amount? I dont want to floor it! Are you supposed to let up on the clutch half way when you put it in first and then press the gas pedal down a little? I dont think you would press the gas pedal down half way with the clutch half way down and then let up off the clutch.
Also, when theres a stop sign ahead, do you throw it in neutral and slow down then come to a stop?
Also at a red light, lets say you are in 4th gear and you see the red light ahead. There are tons of cars behind you and you happen to throw it in neutral and all of a sudden the light changes to green. What do you do now? Do you shift it back up to 4th again? It seems to me that the car would mess up because if you shift it into 1st or 2nd gear going that high of speed it would blow the engine? Or do you not have to press the gas because its already going fast and you just press the clutch to 2nd then let off and press the cluch in again to 3rd without pressing the gas?
IM CONFUSED! I'm getting a manual V6 mustang soon. I know about the shifting patterns and stuff its just that the part where you use the clutch while pressing the gas.How do you drive a stick shift?I drive a stick shift with a smile on my face because I am in control.
Seriously, I will pass along this bit of advise.
Manual transmissions are not sequential gear boxes like the type in a motorcycle. One can be driving in 4th, see a red light ahead, step on the clutch, step on the brake, and as the car slows to a stop, shift directly from 4th to 1st, skipping 3rd and 2nd.
Driving a stick shift is about skill, and knowing your machine. It just takes more skill to drive a stick, which makes you a better driver. YOU must pay attention to your driving, which will keep you from getting in accidents.
Find an older adult that can teach you and EXPLAIN what they are doing as they drive and shift. Then you can get behind the wheel and apply what you have learned to really driving your mustang.
I wish all cars were equipped with manual transmissions. There would be less distracted drivers on the road today.
Hard to eat, drink, talk on a cell phone, check your e-mails on your Blackberry, or text on a cell phone when you need to shift every few seconds.How do you drive a stick shift?About the red light or stop sign, If you're in 4th gear you down shift into 3rd and then 2nd if you have to. It saves your breaks and allows you to easily take off again if the light turns green before you get to the intersection. You only use the clutch to shift gears and never put the clutch in half way, you'll burn it out.How do you drive a stick shift?Too hard to explain all that in words but you sort of have the right idea. When you get the car, go directly to some vacant ground and practice!
btw it's not a great idea to just coast up to lights in neutral. As you decrease your speed you should be coming down through the gears. Does your license cover you for a stick shift anyway?How do you drive a stick shift?ok what you need to do is use the clutch ok and also don't grind your gears ok now the gas and clutch you you press gently on the gas as you let up on the clutch ok How do you drive a stick shift?I dunno if you deserve the V6 mustang...How do you drive a stick shift?push in clutch and shift , then let clutch outHow do you drive a stick shift? Go www.expertvillage.com they will teach you, in one of there videosHow do you drive a stick shift? When you feel the car pull as your letting up on the clutch then start to give it gas. You can also watch your tach the rpm will start to drop as the clutch starts to engage. When that happens give it some more gas and let the clutch out the rest of the way.
When your pulling up to a light in forth it kinda depends on your speed if you still moving at a decent pace you should just downshift to 3rd.
When your down shifting if you bump the gas a little when in neutral right before you change gears down as in 4th to like 2nd. You'll bring the motor revs back to where they should be for that gear. This keeps the car from as you put it messing up.
For example If your on a two lane road and your wanting to pass someone quickly and say your in overdrive. You would downshift to 4th and get around alot quicker. but as your changing gears you have to bring the revs up to match the gear. This is not necessary everytime you downshift but you should learn how to do this correctly. You'll find driving a stick alot of fun especially in rear wheel drive once you learn to do it right.
Avri Lavigne fan?... then you might like this!?
The Ballad of Avril Lavigne
-Princess of Earth-
And %26quot;The Best Damn Thing%26quot;
Life before Avril Lavigne was worse than Hell!
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I learned early on, that if I thought of a song,
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Damn near unconscious - yellow shirt turning red,
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The taste of rage ?of pain ?of hate!
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No friends! - No phone! - Not even a cartoon!
Just me and my teddy bear and some children's clay,
And an old record player, but no records to play!
Nose pressed to the window pane and all I can see,
Are bloody lip-prints and the silhouette of the trees.
The moon is full and orange and the shadows are alive!
I'm so damn scared! ?and there's no place to hide!
-Once I grew up it became perfectly clear;
I was destined to fail, now - lend me your ear.
Most of my life - I spent it half drunk,
The pain of being sober hurt way too much.
It was my little girls 13th birthday, all set for lots of fun,
But it wouldn't happen today, no, today was Sept. 11th, 2001.
She's never had a decent birthday ever since,
Her day is known as 9/11 and will be forever hence.
Just when I thought I was at my ropes endΖΖ?
My house burned and my wife died! God Almighty where the hell were you then?
-After I heard %26quot;The Best Damn Thing%26quot;
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Your words painted a picture I could reach out and touch.
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You shattered my world with %26quot;When you're Gone%26quot;.
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None hold a candle to a feeling like this; they are only words, just words little sis!
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This freedom is priceless, It's crazy insane,
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Rulers from the 4 corners of the Earth, indeed dictators and kings,
Will stop short of nothing for The Secret - this Secret in me!
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I'm spinning so fast - I'm on overload?
The whole damn world is about to explode!
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Orgasmic explosions within my mind,
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I see us walking back and forth and I'm playing the bass,
And you're singing %26quot;Contagious%26quot; right in my face!
%26quot;When You're Gone%26quot; makes me shake and tremble and cry,
The goose bumps are as real as the chills down my spine!
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With you on my side, I'm taking it to the end!
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Shame on them for trying to steal your thunder!
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Just put out the call; I'll be the first one in line!
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And how you always go that extra mile!
I love it so much and there's a reason why,
I can run, I can jump, I can leap - I CAN FLY!
I wake up each morning looking forward to the night,
Spent soaring with you again in pink and purple flight!
I love falling asleep with you?. in my earphones,
My world always fades to black after %26quot;Keep Holding On!%26quot;
These are all the emotions that you make me feel,
And now it is done and now it is sealed!
And now my ballad has to come to an end,
I hope you liked it Avril and you read it again!
Good night punk-rock queen, wherever you are;
Sweet dreams, Princess of Earth - you're my Superstar!
Fine Print:
The names, events and emotions depicted in this ballad are not fictitious! They are absolutely real! Nothing was changed to protect anybody! Nobody was hurt during the making of this ballad! The ballad is an original work by the original writer (that's me) If it is eerily similar to something that anybody has written before, well, tough ****! No one has my permission to reprint this ballad for publication in any newspaper, book, magazine, or any print media of any kind either privately or commercially without my express consent. You may reproduce it on the internet to your hearts desire. God bless the World, God bless America and God bless Avril Lavigne! 漏 8/6/2007 Oscar McLeodAvri Lavigne fan?... then you might like this!?wow.... really great! I used to be an all punk-rocker kind of girl, when Avril just became a household name...
I still like her style, while my music taste has gone a bit to the heavier and deeper side (less punk and more rock).
This is a great poem, it makes me want to read it again (and again)Avri Lavigne fan?... then you might like this!?Hi ?br>
I'm sorry, I don't like her or not really ...
Have a nice day,
Cat.
-Princess of Earth-
And %26quot;The Best Damn Thing%26quot;
Life before Avril Lavigne was worse than Hell!
It was a ghoulish nightmare - a devilish tale!
I learned early on, that if I thought of a song,
It wouldn't be so bad and wouldn't last as long.
Legs trembling: lump in my throat: the jingle - the zip!
The terror! - the bloody red whelps! - the busted lip!
Insides on fire! - my chest is heaving! - I can barely breathe!
Please don't! - Please don't! - I said Pretty Please!
Damn near unconscious - yellow shirt turning red,
I didn't do anything! - I wish I was dead!
That salty - sweet dampness, drying on my face,
The taste of rage ?of pain ?of hate!
So dark! - So cold! - All alone in my room!
No friends! - No phone! - Not even a cartoon!
Just me and my teddy bear and some children's clay,
And an old record player, but no records to play!
Nose pressed to the window pane and all I can see,
Are bloody lip-prints and the silhouette of the trees.
The moon is full and orange and the shadows are alive!
I'm so damn scared! ?and there's no place to hide!
-Once I grew up it became perfectly clear;
I was destined to fail, now - lend me your ear.
Most of my life - I spent it half drunk,
The pain of being sober hurt way too much.
It was my little girls 13th birthday, all set for lots of fun,
But it wouldn't happen today, no, today was Sept. 11th, 2001.
She's never had a decent birthday ever since,
Her day is known as 9/11 and will be forever hence.
Just when I thought I was at my ropes endΖΖ?
My house burned and my wife died! God Almighty where the hell were you then?
-After I heard %26quot;The Best Damn Thing%26quot;
Something happened and everything changed!
Like Cinderella with a magical brush,
Your words painted a picture I could reach out and touch.
You're the Best of the Best -Top Gun - the Elite!
You're ahead of your class and you can't be beat!
You said you had my back, you said, %26quot;Keep Holding On%26quot;
You shattered my world with %26quot;When you're Gone%26quot;.
Your voice broke the chains that bound me and set my spirit free,
Alive for a thousand years, paradise on the face of the deep!
The thrill of victory, ecstasy and bliss, Shangri-La, apocalypse or even the abyss,
None hold a candle to a feeling like this; they are only words, just words little sis!
You were the power inside me, waiting to be released,
And now there's nothing that can stop me, to say the least!
This freedom is priceless, It's crazy insane,
And %26quot;The Best Damn Thing%26quot; is all to blame!
This amazing secret that I have received,
Will always be safe, you can count on me!
This thing's getting really big; it's out of my control,
And your cd started it all! How far will it go?
Rulers from the 4 corners of the Earth, indeed dictators and kings,
Will stop short of nothing for The Secret - this Secret in me!
I'll never give it up; I swear I'll never tell,
Rake me through the coals or burn me in hell!
This Secret that I carry, cannot be put asunder,
It's simply child's play, and yes, there is a last number!
It makes time stand still - it makes infinity end,
And eternity just stops - and starts all over again!
The lightening is ferocious - ice tumbling from the sky,
The clouds are green - I'm spinning around - I'm a perfect F-5!
I'm spinning so fast - I'm on overload?
The whole damn world is about to explode!
Stars going super nova - the faith to move mountains!
Ageless youth inside me - the sea is my fountain!
White knuckles, Dramamine, the ultimate high,
A roller-coaster with no brakes - what a hell of a ride!
It's Shock and Awe ?stealth's in silent flight,
Raining Hell on Baghdad - lighting up their night!
Orgasmic explosions within my mind,
Never - ever felt by humankind!
-The cameras are rolling 360 degrees around us,
The world is our platter - so what's all the fuss?
I see us walking back and forth and I'm playing the bass,
And you're singing %26quot;Contagious%26quot; right in my face!
%26quot;When You're Gone%26quot; makes me shake and tremble and cry,
The goose bumps are as real as the chills down my spine!
Don't ever slow down, don't ever stop %26quot;Girlfriend%26quot;
With you on my side, I'm taking it to the end!
The Rubinoos are snakes, Oh, what a blunder!
Shame on them for trying to steal your thunder!
Now, I've got your back, if you need help any time,
Just put out the call; I'll be the first one in line!
I love your music, your style and your tone,
Developed by you ?all on your own!
I love your square shoulders and the wristbands you wear,
I love your clothes, I love your ties and I love your hair!
I love your laugh and I love your smile,
And how you always go that extra mile!
I love it so much and there's a reason why,
I can run, I can jump, I can leap - I CAN FLY!
I wake up each morning looking forward to the night,
Spent soaring with you again in pink and purple flight!
I love falling asleep with you?. in my earphones,
My world always fades to black after %26quot;Keep Holding On!%26quot;
These are all the emotions that you make me feel,
And now it is done and now it is sealed!
And now my ballad has to come to an end,
I hope you liked it Avril and you read it again!
Good night punk-rock queen, wherever you are;
Sweet dreams, Princess of Earth - you're my Superstar!
Fine Print:
The names, events and emotions depicted in this ballad are not fictitious! They are absolutely real! Nothing was changed to protect anybody! Nobody was hurt during the making of this ballad! The ballad is an original work by the original writer (that's me) If it is eerily similar to something that anybody has written before, well, tough ****! No one has my permission to reprint this ballad for publication in any newspaper, book, magazine, or any print media of any kind either privately or commercially without my express consent. You may reproduce it on the internet to your hearts desire. God bless the World, God bless America and God bless Avril Lavigne! 漏 8/6/2007 Oscar McLeodAvri Lavigne fan?... then you might like this!?wow.... really great! I used to be an all punk-rocker kind of girl, when Avril just became a household name...
I still like her style, while my music taste has gone a bit to the heavier and deeper side (less punk and more rock).
This is a great poem, it makes me want to read it again (and again)Avri Lavigne fan?... then you might like this!?Hi ?br>
I'm sorry, I don't like her or not really ...
Have a nice day,
Cat.
How to stay away from an unpredictable person ?
This person constantly screem and yeals at me when he feels like it ,and ridulise me infront of others,etc..He said he will change but his actually getting worst .Should I brake up with him,and how..
p.s English is my second lenguage,so please excuse my spelling and thanks in advance for your help.How to stay away from an unpredictable person ?Honey, please, dump that jerk right now, he's verbally abusive, doesn't respect you, he'll beat the hell out of you very soon, this is coming.
Why do you put up with his crap?. Please, dump him, tell him to stay away from you, be firm, don't answer his phone calls, I guess your self esteem is low otherwise you'd not accept to be treated like trash by that guy. You deserve a man who loves, respect you, treat you kindly, not a jerk full of hate for women.
I wish you good luck !
p.s English is my second lenguage,so please excuse my spelling and thanks in advance for your help.How to stay away from an unpredictable person ?Honey, please, dump that jerk right now, he's verbally abusive, doesn't respect you, he'll beat the hell out of you very soon, this is coming.
Why do you put up with his crap?. Please, dump him, tell him to stay away from you, be firm, don't answer his phone calls, I guess your self esteem is low otherwise you'd not accept to be treated like trash by that guy. You deserve a man who loves, respect you, treat you kindly, not a jerk full of hate for women.
I wish you good luck !
What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?
I was talking to my friend how it seems, that no matter what the one thing that breaks the most is the alternator.
Our teacher butted in and said that the one thing that goes the most is the brakes. He said that we were wrong, and because he has been driving for years (not working on them, driving them) he has more knowledge of how they work. He then proceeded to say that when he drove, and they started to squeak, then it was time to change the system.
So, would one say that alternator would go first, or would the brake system would go first.
-thank you for your time.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Brakes definitely have to be replaced much more often than alternators, but only by design. Of all of the parts of the car that aren't scheduled to be replaced and should last, the alternator is definitely the least reliable. Next would be the transmission and finally the engine.
The braking systems are typically reliant, but the brake pads and rotors will be replaced a few times over.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?if u have a shitty car... everythingWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?As soon as i saw this i thought altenator as well.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?BrakesWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?The alternator would go bad before the break system goes bad, but the break pads might wear down before the alternator breaks.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?I havent seen an alternator break in over 30 years in the businessWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Surely it depends on how you drive the thing?
If you ride the clutch there's every chance that'll go before anything else, if you're heavy on the breaks they'll take the most wear.
Something like the alternator is designed to work for a period of time, barring major malfunction, so it's unlikely it'll go before something that takes daily wear and tear.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?i tould say it neiher its the stupid penny thing where you slide the pennies 9 cars ive been in they were all brokenWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?brakes is true the average american would have completly replace the brake system every 20,000 milesWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?The driver.
Think about it, it the driver didn't drive it, than hardly anything would go wrong, but when driven often, a lot goes wrong.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Hi,
The breaks usualy go first but the thing that breaks down it tires. You always need them.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?i have a bmw and my altinator has went out twice so i think its the altinatorWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?The correct answer is %26quot;whatever is going to be most inconvenient and expensive to fix%26quot; Or at least that is the way it seems.
Technically, the break pads need to be replaced more often then the average alternator breaks, so in a sense your teacher is correct. However changing of break pads is expected maintenance so it's not really %26quot;breaking%26quot; so much as %26quot;wearing out%26quot;. If you don't change them out when you should then you can break other parts of the break system though.
So if you maintain your car properly, the alternator will BREAK first, but the break pads will need REPLACED first.
You are both right! :DWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Brakes don't break down. They get worn - and that is part of the design. When brakes REALLY fail, you get into accidents. When was the last time you heard of somebody getting into accidents due to failed brakes?
When you throw out REAL shoes, you don't say it broke, but the shoe wore out.
====
Alternators are failure is NOT part of the design. So when you replace them it is REAL failure (not just worn down as %26quot;designed%26quot;). Nobody ever says the alternator WORE OUT.
Good Luck...What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?My experience has taught me that the brakes require the most often repair. Usually starting at around 25,000 to 30,000 miles some vehicles more and some less but this is the average. Alternators are long lived on the average and usually last well into the upper 80,000 mile range. This is just my observation over the last 41 years. I would say that your teacher is more accurate with his estimate.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?For my car... Two time the brake pad will worn out, not break or broken, it just need replacement. Then dead battery. Alternator or starter will breaking down.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Replacing your brakes are consider maintenance. If you don't replace them when they are wore out you might mess up your rotors and have no stopping power. I have a 78 280z and the alternator just went out.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Brakes don't count--they're %26quot;consumables,%26quot; like wiper blades, tires, and plugs. The mechanical systems of the brakes such as wheel cylinders aren't much susceptible to breakdown--we rebuild them because the rubber wears out from the fluid. I'd say that the most vulnerable MECHANICAL systems are alternators and water pumps, because of the inefficiency of their basic design. If they're belt-driven, the belt tension needed to operate them is hard on their bearings, and copper alternator windings will wear thin. The exception would be water pumps that are gear-driven, like Toyota's--mine lasted 220,000 miles--because there's no tension. Next would be the timing belt, which wears because it's rubber. After that come components subject to a combination of heat and pressure--radiators, thermostats, hoses, and sensors. Shocks, struts, and CV joints deteriorate because of shock and torque.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?The radio.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Air conditioning vents. One of my kids will break one playing with them before my brakes wear out.pc or mac higher mileage
Our teacher butted in and said that the one thing that goes the most is the brakes. He said that we were wrong, and because he has been driving for years (not working on them, driving them) he has more knowledge of how they work. He then proceeded to say that when he drove, and they started to squeak, then it was time to change the system.
So, would one say that alternator would go first, or would the brake system would go first.
-thank you for your time.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Brakes definitely have to be replaced much more often than alternators, but only by design. Of all of the parts of the car that aren't scheduled to be replaced and should last, the alternator is definitely the least reliable. Next would be the transmission and finally the engine.
The braking systems are typically reliant, but the brake pads and rotors will be replaced a few times over.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?if u have a shitty car... everythingWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?As soon as i saw this i thought altenator as well.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?BrakesWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?The alternator would go bad before the break system goes bad, but the break pads might wear down before the alternator breaks.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?I havent seen an alternator break in over 30 years in the businessWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Surely it depends on how you drive the thing?
If you ride the clutch there's every chance that'll go before anything else, if you're heavy on the breaks they'll take the most wear.
Something like the alternator is designed to work for a period of time, barring major malfunction, so it's unlikely it'll go before something that takes daily wear and tear.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?i tould say it neiher its the stupid penny thing where you slide the pennies 9 cars ive been in they were all brokenWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?brakes is true the average american would have completly replace the brake system every 20,000 milesWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?The driver.
Think about it, it the driver didn't drive it, than hardly anything would go wrong, but when driven often, a lot goes wrong.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Hi,
The breaks usualy go first but the thing that breaks down it tires. You always need them.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?i have a bmw and my altinator has went out twice so i think its the altinatorWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?The correct answer is %26quot;whatever is going to be most inconvenient and expensive to fix%26quot; Or at least that is the way it seems.
Technically, the break pads need to be replaced more often then the average alternator breaks, so in a sense your teacher is correct. However changing of break pads is expected maintenance so it's not really %26quot;breaking%26quot; so much as %26quot;wearing out%26quot;. If you don't change them out when you should then you can break other parts of the break system though.
So if you maintain your car properly, the alternator will BREAK first, but the break pads will need REPLACED first.
You are both right! :DWhat part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Brakes don't break down. They get worn - and that is part of the design. When brakes REALLY fail, you get into accidents. When was the last time you heard of somebody getting into accidents due to failed brakes?
When you throw out REAL shoes, you don't say it broke, but the shoe wore out.
====
Alternators are failure is NOT part of the design. So when you replace them it is REAL failure (not just worn down as %26quot;designed%26quot;). Nobody ever says the alternator WORE OUT.
Good Luck...What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?My experience has taught me that the brakes require the most often repair. Usually starting at around 25,000 to 30,000 miles some vehicles more and some less but this is the average. Alternators are long lived on the average and usually last well into the upper 80,000 mile range. This is just my observation over the last 41 years. I would say that your teacher is more accurate with his estimate.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?For my car... Two time the brake pad will worn out, not break or broken, it just need replacement. Then dead battery. Alternator or starter will breaking down.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Replacing your brakes are consider maintenance. If you don't replace them when they are wore out you might mess up your rotors and have no stopping power. I have a 78 280z and the alternator just went out.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Brakes don't count--they're %26quot;consumables,%26quot; like wiper blades, tires, and plugs. The mechanical systems of the brakes such as wheel cylinders aren't much susceptible to breakdown--we rebuild them because the rubber wears out from the fluid. I'd say that the most vulnerable MECHANICAL systems are alternators and water pumps, because of the inefficiency of their basic design. If they're belt-driven, the belt tension needed to operate them is hard on their bearings, and copper alternator windings will wear thin. The exception would be water pumps that are gear-driven, like Toyota's--mine lasted 220,000 miles--because there's no tension. Next would be the timing belt, which wears because it's rubber. After that come components subject to a combination of heat and pressure--radiators, thermostats, hoses, and sensors. Shocks, struts, and CV joints deteriorate because of shock and torque.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?The radio.What part of a car is the one thing that breaks the most?Air conditioning vents. One of my kids will break one playing with them before my brakes wear out.
Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?
Great Pick Up Lines!
I wish I was one of your tears, so I could be born in your eye, run down your cheek, and die on your lips.
Did you know they changed the alphabet? They put U and I together.
Can I borrow that quarter, 'cause my mom told me to call home when I fell in love
What's wrong? You're looking a little sad and gloomy. What you need is some vitamin me.
Are your legs tired? 'cause you been running through my mind ALL day long.
Are you lost? 'cause it's so strange to see an angel so far from heaven.
Is your father a thief? 'cause he stole the sparkle from the stars, and put it in your eyes. (yo, watch out though, and be prepared with a snappy answer just in case she says 'yes')
Do you believe in love at first sight, or do I have to walk by you again?
What's that in your eye? Oh...it's a sparkle.
If I said you were an angel, would you treat me like the devil tonight?
Can I see that label? I just wanted to know if you were made in heaven.
Do you like raisins? How about a date?
So... How am I doin'?
I miss my teddy bear...Would you sleep with me?
You look great and all, but do you know what'd really look good on you? Me.
Could I get some directions? (%26quot;To where?%26quot;) To your heart.
Is it hot in here, or is it just you?
If I told you you had a beautiful body, would you hold it against me?
Look at you, with all those curves, and me with no brakes.
Can I flirt with you?
Hi, my name's _____, but you can call me %26quot;lover%26quot;.
(another quarter line). Could I borrow a quarter? 'cause I just want to call your mother and thank her.
(lick your finger and then touch her shirt). Here, let me help you out of those wet clothes.
What do you like for breakfast?
Say, did we go to different schools together?
Hi, my name is _____, how do you like me so far?
(At the copy machine) Reproducing, eh? Can I help?
Woman asks, %26quot;Excuse me, do you have the time?%26quot; You : %26quot;Do you have the
energy?%26quot;
You look like the type of girl that's heard every line in the book. So what's one more?
Hi, I make more money than you can spend.
I'm new in town...could you give me directions to your apartment?
I think you're the most beautiful girl I've seen...on a Wednesday
I know this is going to sound like a line, but did that sound like a line? Are you disappointed?
I know I don't look like much now, but I'm drinking milk.
Do you have a map? I just got lost in your eyes.
Are you religious? Good, cause I'm here to answer your prayers.
Did it hurt? (Did what hurt) When you fell out of heaven.
Inheriting 80 million doesn't mean much when you have a weak heart.
I lost my phone number, can I borrow yours?
If your parents hadn't met, I'd be a very unhappy man right now.
Do you drink milk? It sure did your body good.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?I think the first one's my favourite. Sadly, no one's ever used a chat up line on me, so I'd be flattered by any of these.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?%26quot;Hi, I make more money than you can spend.%26quot;
i wouldn't use that in case it gets put to the test!
but i quite like the photocopy one
but the best tactic is called talking at gettin to know them, maybe?it's called socialisingGuys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?pick up lines are usually lame and unoriginal... i pitty the women you'd use them on. even more i pitty whoever uses them...Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?Girls : I wish I was one of your tears, so I could be born in your eye, run down your cheek, and die on your lips.
romanticGuys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?What's wrong with being genuine? Are you the real deal? Can you be comfortable being yourself?Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?i am totally not gonna read that unbelievably long list!Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?i feel sorry for your girlfriend,,Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?Any...If it's from a handsome...dashing...guy...who has this gr8 physique...and lovely smile.....:)Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?Nice lines.
Thank you.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?as much as it pains me to say it i think the helping you out of your wet clothes is funny. although chat up lines dont work on meGuys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?none....Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?I'm a female and none has won me over.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?The first one is great - some of the others are ok, some yuk and some just awful ......... would make me laugh though.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?how about %26quot;is that a mirror in your knickers? Because i can see myself in there%26quot;Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?Hi my name is ******, if you like the sound of that you wanna hear my number.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?the third is one of my favourites but most of them are all really good.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?None! Pick up lines are a no no! And that is way too long.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?lol, if a guy said this to me-
Woman asks, %26quot;Excuse me, do you have the time?%26quot; You : %26quot;Do you have the
energy?%26quot;
it would take me by surprise and make me laugh so i would give him time of day :O)Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?Umm, those are all kind of bad. If someone came up to me and said What's wrong? You're looking a little sad and gloomy. You need some vitamin me. I would probably talk to them just because it's so dumb it's funny. If you're seriously using these, I feel bad for you.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?lol im a girl and if a guy came up to me and asked %26quot;Can i flirt with you?%26quot; that would totally make me surprised. cuz instead of some gay pickup, theyd just come rite out n say it =DGuys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?These two are my favorites:
What's wrong? You're looking a little sad and gloomy. What you need is some vitamin me.
You look like the type of girl that's heard every line in the book. So what's one more?
Not saying that they would work, they would just make me laugh. I'm so tired of hearing lines like that. They are a cheesy turn off. hahaGuys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?I like these two the best
Can I flirt with you?
Hi, my name is _____, how do you like me so far?
I wish I was one of your tears, so I could be born in your eye, run down your cheek, and die on your lips.
Did you know they changed the alphabet? They put U and I together.
Can I borrow that quarter, 'cause my mom told me to call home when I fell in love
What's wrong? You're looking a little sad and gloomy. What you need is some vitamin me.
Are your legs tired? 'cause you been running through my mind ALL day long.
Are you lost? 'cause it's so strange to see an angel so far from heaven.
Is your father a thief? 'cause he stole the sparkle from the stars, and put it in your eyes. (yo, watch out though, and be prepared with a snappy answer just in case she says 'yes')
Do you believe in love at first sight, or do I have to walk by you again?
What's that in your eye? Oh...it's a sparkle.
If I said you were an angel, would you treat me like the devil tonight?
Can I see that label? I just wanted to know if you were made in heaven.
Do you like raisins? How about a date?
So... How am I doin'?
I miss my teddy bear...Would you sleep with me?
You look great and all, but do you know what'd really look good on you? Me.
Could I get some directions? (%26quot;To where?%26quot;) To your heart.
Is it hot in here, or is it just you?
If I told you you had a beautiful body, would you hold it against me?
Look at you, with all those curves, and me with no brakes.
Can I flirt with you?
Hi, my name's _____, but you can call me %26quot;lover%26quot;.
(another quarter line). Could I borrow a quarter? 'cause I just want to call your mother and thank her.
(lick your finger and then touch her shirt). Here, let me help you out of those wet clothes.
What do you like for breakfast?
Say, did we go to different schools together?
Hi, my name is _____, how do you like me so far?
(At the copy machine) Reproducing, eh? Can I help?
Woman asks, %26quot;Excuse me, do you have the time?%26quot; You : %26quot;Do you have the
energy?%26quot;
You look like the type of girl that's heard every line in the book. So what's one more?
Hi, I make more money than you can spend.
I'm new in town...could you give me directions to your apartment?
I think you're the most beautiful girl I've seen...on a Wednesday
I know this is going to sound like a line, but did that sound like a line? Are you disappointed?
I know I don't look like much now, but I'm drinking milk.
Do you have a map? I just got lost in your eyes.
Are you religious? Good, cause I'm here to answer your prayers.
Did it hurt? (Did what hurt) When you fell out of heaven.
Inheriting 80 million doesn't mean much when you have a weak heart.
I lost my phone number, can I borrow yours?
If your parents hadn't met, I'd be a very unhappy man right now.
Do you drink milk? It sure did your body good.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?I think the first one's my favourite. Sadly, no one's ever used a chat up line on me, so I'd be flattered by any of these.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?%26quot;Hi, I make more money than you can spend.%26quot;
i wouldn't use that in case it gets put to the test!
but i quite like the photocopy one
but the best tactic is called talking at gettin to know them, maybe?it's called socialisingGuys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?pick up lines are usually lame and unoriginal... i pitty the women you'd use them on. even more i pitty whoever uses them...Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?Girls : I wish I was one of your tears, so I could be born in your eye, run down your cheek, and die on your lips.
romanticGuys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?What's wrong with being genuine? Are you the real deal? Can you be comfortable being yourself?Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?i am totally not gonna read that unbelievably long list!Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?i feel sorry for your girlfriend,,Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?Any...If it's from a handsome...dashing...guy...who has this gr8 physique...and lovely smile.....:)Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?Nice lines.
Thank you.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?as much as it pains me to say it i think the helping you out of your wet clothes is funny. although chat up lines dont work on meGuys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?none....Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?I'm a female and none has won me over.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?The first one is great - some of the others are ok, some yuk and some just awful ......... would make me laugh though.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?how about %26quot;is that a mirror in your knickers? Because i can see myself in there%26quot;Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?Hi my name is ******, if you like the sound of that you wanna hear my number.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?the third is one of my favourites but most of them are all really good.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?None! Pick up lines are a no no! And that is way too long.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?lol, if a guy said this to me-
Woman asks, %26quot;Excuse me, do you have the time?%26quot; You : %26quot;Do you have the
energy?%26quot;
it would take me by surprise and make me laugh so i would give him time of day :O)Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?Umm, those are all kind of bad. If someone came up to me and said What's wrong? You're looking a little sad and gloomy. You need some vitamin me. I would probably talk to them just because it's so dumb it's funny. If you're seriously using these, I feel bad for you.Guys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?lol im a girl and if a guy came up to me and asked %26quot;Can i flirt with you?%26quot; that would totally make me surprised. cuz instead of some gay pickup, theyd just come rite out n say it =DGuys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?These two are my favorites:
What's wrong? You're looking a little sad and gloomy. What you need is some vitamin me.
You look like the type of girl that's heard every line in the book. So what's one more?
Not saying that they would work, they would just make me laugh. I'm so tired of hearing lines like that. They are a cheesy turn off. hahaGuys which one would you use? girls which one would win you over?I like these two the best
Can I flirt with you?
Hi, my name is _____, how do you like me so far?
I know most of you hate these but....?
I been working on a new song and i want to know what you guys think of what i got so far!
I know some of it doesn't fit but idk what to do with those parts!
I'm wide awake,about to brake,
throwing body's in the lake,
agressions got me by the neck
for goodness sake
just send the snakes or pull the brake,
its the second fake and i cant take
another day,
because its the end of may
cus i am in here and full of hate
for indirected killin g's or incorrect abillity's
to fill Mc's full of unrecked apeal and he
cant stop the will in me
to make you see a real mc
so take your seat and you will see
the truth can be, a walk to see
a killin bee a soon to be, ready to reach
a class to teach, a real treat so don't beat
and keep your feet, it aint defeat
that stole your jeep or your freak
so we can take it to the street
N' we can bleed
Level Deeds and Cool your C's
We're just here for Q's and P's
we could end this in the scene
just please
**** it, this is lame
your all the same
Nothin i could do could ever make you change
or make ya strain, about the frame.............
of tha fame of the cain
cus you cant do anything,
i sank the game its just insane
and faked the same, then made it rain
we recked the train, it aint no game
we in society of variety
pullin ya kniffes on me
not like anyone else could see
you fallin down ya balcony
and while they askin how can he
take another ounce of E-
X-to the-C, to set him free
make these motha ******* climb a tree
and make um pee
in they pants, with riddin aunts
but, no they cants cus theyre in a trance
and without them there aint a chance
So they look up to you
hell i aint lieing we all do
We even see what you do when we aint lookin
from where you eat to what your cookin'
don't be shooken, its just a picture tooken
a common foot an we are waiting for you to mess up
But it wont happen
you know it,
All you tell us is lies and we know it
but were blind and buzzed so we all blow it
over are heads and start
Callin feds, and throwin lead
just straighten our heads and buy our bread
But its been said followin this life style will get you dead
2nd one(Didn't fit with the rest of it)
If i had a million dollars I would stuff it in my drawers
put it on a track and give it back like it was yours
then buy ya a car and take ya round on tours
tell ya the pains gone and that whats mines yours
Dont ever for get that, we changin course
Its truth, its gone, but my love is yours
i'm prayin for ya moms, i'm even on all fours
i know its hard but we need to use force
I'm gunna show ya all what i can do with rap
put it on your speakers and leave it in your stack
chill back and listen to the game get cracked
i'm bringin rap back to the 90's completely in-tact
its an attack on your nerves and your contract
gunna bring it back hard and show you how to act
when the roofs down but foundations aint tapped
undergrounds alive and we carrying the sack
cus we gunna bring it to your house and leave it on ya mat
tell ya the house is gone and bring around a surprise attack
and when it falls down we gunna smash it with a bat
So, rate it and tell me where it needs improvement!I know most of you hate these but....?The content is something that has been covered many a time before especially the way in which you present it. Try being more specific and less broad and by this I mean going in either direction, extremely abstract or extremely blunt.
Your rhymes are also very simple, which is usually only overlooked if the substance is in somehow notably creative. So definitely work on that as well.I know most of you hate these but....?ya thats pretty dope! so do u have anything recorded uploaded online?I know most of you hate these but....?Its nice! I would rate it as 3 out of 5!I know most of you hate these but....?Songs dont always have to ryhme. You did good.This is an exaple.%26quot;cus we gunna bring it to your house and leave it on ya mat
tell ya the house is gone and bring around a surprise attack
and when it falls down we gunna smash it with a bat%26quot; IThat parts a little to ehh
Out of 5 id give u a 2I know most of you hate these but....?It's great I wuld buy it.
Can you answer mine?
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?I know most of you hate these but....?you need beats
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eFFqP5HjK
I know some of it doesn't fit but idk what to do with those parts!
I'm wide awake,about to brake,
throwing body's in the lake,
agressions got me by the neck
for goodness sake
just send the snakes or pull the brake,
its the second fake and i cant take
another day,
because its the end of may
cus i am in here and full of hate
for indirected killin g's or incorrect abillity's
to fill Mc's full of unrecked apeal and he
cant stop the will in me
to make you see a real mc
so take your seat and you will see
the truth can be, a walk to see
a killin bee a soon to be, ready to reach
a class to teach, a real treat so don't beat
and keep your feet, it aint defeat
that stole your jeep or your freak
so we can take it to the street
N' we can bleed
Level Deeds and Cool your C's
We're just here for Q's and P's
we could end this in the scene
just please
**** it, this is lame
your all the same
Nothin i could do could ever make you change
or make ya strain, about the frame.............
of tha fame of the cain
cus you cant do anything,
i sank the game its just insane
and faked the same, then made it rain
we recked the train, it aint no game
we in society of variety
pullin ya kniffes on me
not like anyone else could see
you fallin down ya balcony
and while they askin how can he
take another ounce of E-
X-to the-C, to set him free
make these motha ******* climb a tree
and make um pee
in they pants, with riddin aunts
but, no they cants cus theyre in a trance
and without them there aint a chance
So they look up to you
hell i aint lieing we all do
We even see what you do when we aint lookin
from where you eat to what your cookin'
don't be shooken, its just a picture tooken
a common foot an we are waiting for you to mess up
But it wont happen
you know it,
All you tell us is lies and we know it
but were blind and buzzed so we all blow it
over are heads and start
Callin feds, and throwin lead
just straighten our heads and buy our bread
But its been said followin this life style will get you dead
2nd one(Didn't fit with the rest of it)
If i had a million dollars I would stuff it in my drawers
put it on a track and give it back like it was yours
then buy ya a car and take ya round on tours
tell ya the pains gone and that whats mines yours
Dont ever for get that, we changin course
Its truth, its gone, but my love is yours
i'm prayin for ya moms, i'm even on all fours
i know its hard but we need to use force
I'm gunna show ya all what i can do with rap
put it on your speakers and leave it in your stack
chill back and listen to the game get cracked
i'm bringin rap back to the 90's completely in-tact
its an attack on your nerves and your contract
gunna bring it back hard and show you how to act
when the roofs down but foundations aint tapped
undergrounds alive and we carrying the sack
cus we gunna bring it to your house and leave it on ya mat
tell ya the house is gone and bring around a surprise attack
and when it falls down we gunna smash it with a bat
So, rate it and tell me where it needs improvement!I know most of you hate these but....?The content is something that has been covered many a time before especially the way in which you present it. Try being more specific and less broad and by this I mean going in either direction, extremely abstract or extremely blunt.
Your rhymes are also very simple, which is usually only overlooked if the substance is in somehow notably creative. So definitely work on that as well.I know most of you hate these but....?ya thats pretty dope! so do u have anything recorded uploaded online?I know most of you hate these but....?Its nice! I would rate it as 3 out of 5!I know most of you hate these but....?Songs dont always have to ryhme. You did good.This is an exaple.%26quot;cus we gunna bring it to your house and leave it on ya mat
tell ya the house is gone and bring around a surprise attack
and when it falls down we gunna smash it with a bat%26quot; IThat parts a little to ehh
Out of 5 id give u a 2I know most of you hate these but....?It's great I wuld buy it.
Can you answer mine?
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?I know most of you hate these but....?you need beats
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eFFqP5HjK
Do i need new brake rotors?
recently i started hearing a squeaking noise from the front passenger side of my car. kinda hard to explain but its a squeak squeak squeak like in a rhythm. when i speed up the rhythm speeds up and when i slow down it also slows down. so i figured it was my rotors but asked a friend just to be sure and he said to try changing my brake pads first. so i changed them and it helped for about a week and how they are squeaking again and alot worse than before and kind of embarrassing to say the least. before i bought some rotors, i just wanted your opinions. thanks for any help. oh i dont know if it matters but it is on a 1999 chevy malibu. thanks.Do i need new brake rotors?it could be u caused brake fade and the pads are glazed over.are they semi metallic is do maybe u didn't break them inDo i need new brake rotors?Your brakes pads were changed. A squeak squeak squeak would indicate a warped rotor:
1. Buy brand new rotors if they are inexpensive. Rotors can be as low as $20ish and above $200.
2. Have a shop %26quot;turn%26quot; your rotors which means grinding them down so that they are perfectly flat. This is usually included if you have a %26quot;break job%26quot; done on your car. Or take the rotors off yourself and carry them into a machine shop that grinds rotors.Do i need new brake rotors?Go to a auto part store and buy disc brake quite either blue or red and follow the directions.
1. Buy brand new rotors if they are inexpensive. Rotors can be as low as $20ish and above $200.
2. Have a shop %26quot;turn%26quot; your rotors which means grinding them down so that they are perfectly flat. This is usually included if you have a %26quot;break job%26quot; done on your car. Or take the rotors off yourself and carry them into a machine shop that grinds rotors.Do i need new brake rotors?Go to a auto part store and buy disc brake quite either blue or red and follow the directions.
My abs and check engine light stays on 2001 Ford Sport Trac- anyone know the fix, or had this happen as well?
No apparent reason, just came on one day. My buddy has a computer that you can hook up to your rig and trouble shoot it - changed some fuses and tinkered around with things but had no luck. He thought it might be brake dust build up on whatever sensor that initiates the light - but haven't found or seen anything like that yet from underneath the rig? Would really like to cure the problem, without paying for a cure through the nose, we all know how that goes. I think the ABS light is also making the check engine light stay on - at least my thought. Have had it in for it's 75000 mile check up and they said all looked well - but it wasn't at a ford Dealer. Guess I should have paid the money and done it right with Ford - that is my current awnser - you got a better one?My abs and check engine light stays on 2001 Ford Sport Trac- anyone know the fix, or had this happen as well?The abs light is for brakes...check the fluid or how much wear is on them. The check engine light could be anything from your gas cap being loose to some thing more serious. If you have an AutoZone or other parts store near you, they can hook up a diagnostic computer to your car and it will tell what's wrong with it for free and then you will know exactly what's wrong before you spend money on it.My abs and check engine light stays on 2001 Ford Sport Trac- anyone know the fix, or had this happen as well?One of the most likely problems that year had was the differential ABS sensor. What codes were found?My abs and check engine light stays on 2001 Ford Sport Trac- anyone know the fix, or had this happen as well?as someone else has suggested what computer code was found??? unless you have found the correct codes there is little your friend can do! so amy i suggest a trip to %26quot;ford%26quot; had a 4d truck all sorts of trouble tried same thing, no go! even the Ford dealer was scratching their heads, One day, it dawned on my wife the idea, that maybe %26quot; the computer%26quot; has gone nuts! guess what %26quot;exactly%26quot;!!!!!! i would just bite my do it thyself and hot foot it!My abs and check engine light stays on 2001 Ford Sport Trac- anyone know the fix, or had this happen as well?it probably and O2 sensor my stang throws a code that says it running to lean then will turn around and say its running to rich.. all cause of an oxygen sensor
Is my Song good or not?
I have been singing for about 5 years now and writing songs for around 3 years
i kinda rushed this song did not really think about how i can improve it but i know i can but
i want to get other peoples opinion's before i change it
I am tired of your excuses all of your lies
and putting my life aside
you always get your way i never get a say
Its like your the king and i the girl that falls
and you swore
Chrs
You'd never hurt me
You'd never brake my heart
that you loved me right from the start
now i dont know who you are...Anymore
Ok thats all i have to go so i will add more tomrrow please tell me what you really think and what i should work on cuz i found bits i should fix but i am not in the mood right now
Ok thanks everybodyIs my Song good or not?It sounds really awesome ! And I can already hear the melody !
Sounds like a really good power ballad to me.
Keep up the good work !Is my Song good or not?well i have no idea how it goes lyrically its ok not great u should lean how to spell better if you make a vocal clip of you singing it and link us here i would love to hear it and mayb mix some beats and guitar for uIs my Song good or not?not bad... hard to tell really the singing makes the song you could say the bird bird bird the bird is the word and have a hit.... if you sing it good :P sounds good though good job :PIs my Song good or not?Not really. You have grammar and spelling issues, and you cannot tell whether a song is good or not through it's lyrics only.
In addition, it's very stumbling, and thirteen a dozen.vc i have many invention ideas
i kinda rushed this song did not really think about how i can improve it but i know i can but
i want to get other peoples opinion's before i change it
I am tired of your excuses all of your lies
and putting my life aside
you always get your way i never get a say
Its like your the king and i the girl that falls
and you swore
Chrs
You'd never hurt me
You'd never brake my heart
that you loved me right from the start
now i dont know who you are...Anymore
Ok thats all i have to go so i will add more tomrrow please tell me what you really think and what i should work on cuz i found bits i should fix but i am not in the mood right now
Ok thanks everybodyIs my Song good or not?It sounds really awesome ! And I can already hear the melody !
Sounds like a really good power ballad to me.
Keep up the good work !Is my Song good or not?well i have no idea how it goes lyrically its ok not great u should lean how to spell better if you make a vocal clip of you singing it and link us here i would love to hear it and mayb mix some beats and guitar for uIs my Song good or not?not bad... hard to tell really the singing makes the song you could say the bird bird bird the bird is the word and have a hit.... if you sing it good :P sounds good though good job :PIs my Song good or not?Not really. You have grammar and spelling issues, and you cannot tell whether a song is good or not through it's lyrics only.
In addition, it's very stumbling, and thirteen a dozen.
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